I dreamed I met Tom Gabe or I dreamed I met Laura?
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schampo Borne on the FM Waves
Number of posts : 71 Reputation : 3 Cool Points : 5054 Registration date : 2010-10-07
Subject: I dreamed I met Tom Gabe or I dreamed I met Laura? Mon May 28, 2012 2:25 pm
My band, The Sensitives just released our first album and now we´ve got a deal for a vinyl on the album with a label and are gonna take a song from the first demo/EP we made as a bonus for it.
The song has a line that goes "I dreamed I met Tom Gabel in my mothers yard........................." and so on (the lyrics are just a bunch of weird ass dreams I´ve had that I puted into a song).
We have all the tracks because we recorded it ourselves in our rehearsal room and can make changes and so on and what I can´t figure out is; should we change the lyrics from Tom to Laura?
The next line is "I hope the day I meet Tom Gabel it´ll be in my mothers yard.............". You think the first one should be "Tom" and the second line "Laura"? I´m thing the first one was in the past and the second line is future.
Here´s the song if you wanna check it out, the Tom Gabel part comes in the last verse if you can´t stand the rest of the song!=)
JustinAtWill Baby, I'm an Anarchist!
Number of posts : 1582 Age : 35 Location : Destin, FL Manhandle the Panhandle! Reputation : 107 Cool Points : 7154 Registration date : 2008-05-09
Subject: Re: I dreamed I met Tom Gabe or I dreamed I met Laura? Mon May 28, 2012 2:40 pm
I dig it. The music reminds me alot of Mischief Brew.
WWD4D? Baby, I'm an Anarchist!
Number of posts : 1245 Age : 38 Location : Hull, England Reputation : 72 Cool Points : 6858 Registration date : 2008-04-09
Subject: Re: I dreamed I met Tom Gabe or I dreamed I met Laura? Mon May 28, 2012 3:31 pm
I like the idea of changing the two names. It tells a story, which I like.
StoolPigeon Ninja Warrior
Number of posts : 6265 Age : 34 Location : Bank Uber, BC Reputation : 180 Cool Points : 10189 Registration date : 2008-07-20
Subject: Re: I dreamed I met Tom Gabe or I dreamed I met Laura? Wed May 30, 2012 8:15 pm
I agree with the idea of switching for the second line. But, yeah, I dig the music, it would be cool to hear some more.
mitchard Untouchable
Number of posts : 397 Age : 36 Location : Arlington, WA Reputation : 30 Cool Points : 5361 Registration date : 2010-12-05
Subject: Re: I dreamed I met Tom Gabe or I dreamed I met Laura? Thu May 31, 2012 1:02 am
I like the second line switch as well.
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